Well , I have MUET exam in a few days and this is my second attempt trying to answer the past year question. For the time being, I honestly don't have the mood to write. Leaving my draft here. Just in case I feel like continuing it.
“Women
make better leaders than men”
Main
Idea
-For peace to prevail. (world history
suggests that violence and conflicts were more evident under male leadership
than under female leadership )
-great leaders have great communication
skills. (women prefer to communicate directly. Ask big-picture question about
their work and its value . And they listen to others’)
-more sensitive towards the need of society
. and most women are more meticulous and detailed . (look for minor details)
Draft 1
Apropos of this statement, I am in
consummate accord with it; women make better leaders than men. Observing this
issue from some perspectives, I believe that a leader is like a helmsman of a
sailing ship. It may seem like a rather simple and easy task:- to steer the vessel and
conduct the whole crew to arrive at the desired destination but the
responsibilities are huge. The team are wholly reliant on the sacrosanct ability
of their leader; one small mistake and the whole ship sink. Nevertheless,
despite the capability that a leader should possess, many of us still keep bringing
up the issue of who have the potential to be greater leader, men or women? We
have not only seen this debate between genders for these past few years but
since time immemorial. In my humble opinion, it is rather a more accurate notion
to agree that women make better leaders due to their creativity in solving
problems, sensitivity towards the society need and ability to communicate
directly.
To begin with, women do prefer to solve the problems in a more
creative way, unlike men whom mostly preferred to end any confrontation with
violence. As far as we can submerge
ourselves in the world of history, we see wars, power struggles, conflicts and
violent competitions between humans as the revolutions stroke. Predominantly
dominated by male rulers and leaders, the tendency in prevailing peace always
ended in vain or else, vie. As the ruling powers relegated from men to women
since these past few years, only then people start living in amity.
Google : Hatshepsut … queen victoria….bloody marry, record their approach towards war vs other kings.
Continue later ….
Disputing:
Have wars BUT...
Even though most of the women who are known to be great till date,
e.g. Queen Isabella of Spain, Queens Marry, a.k.a. Bloody Marry, Victoria, and
Elizabeth of Britain, all have ruled over vast spectrums of power. And they
often have done so ruthlessly, achieving goals with an iron hand. They have
waged wars that are barely comparable to only few of those devised by men.
These women are not anomalies of history, but examples from numerous others,
who went beyond the boundaries of gender in the path of prevailing in power
while expending peace whenever they deemed it to be expendable.
Concluding paragraph ?
The two greatest wars of modern history, World Wars I & II, have
taught us that wars are impersonal. Race, religion, nationality, sex are only
pretence to the universally human lust for power. During both
the global conflicts men were in the rulers’ thrones.
It will also be foolish to
ignore that Margaret Thatcher, the famed Iron Lady who spared no rod against a
minnow enemy in the war of Falkland, whom has prevented a larger scale of war (compare with: how the greats Winston Churchill and Franklyn D. Roosevelt had been tackling
the Axis of Hitler). A deeper perspective always reveals to historians that conflict is a
generic tendency of humans. So peace being disturbed is not the liability of
men only, but humans in general, and a power shift, from men to women, is
destined to be fruitful in prevailing peace.
Argument for male leaders:
The gender issue is only a determinant in the battle of the sexes, not the battles among nations and peoples. It is therefore impertinent, if not irrational, to conclude that world conflicts result from the rule of a particular gender and the finer sex would do a better job at prevailing peace if selectively put at the helm of human nations….. OR .
* I should read more. At time like this, I started to realize how important it is to read :'(
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